Watch our first draft here!
And here is a summary of the feedback that we receive:
In general, the opening scene is very good with nice color and nice audio, music
The establishing shot and the dancing shot would be much better if they were less shaky, smoother
The car scene is quite unrelated because the car is too far away make the meaning may not be covey correctly
We ourselves also identify something that not really good about this first draft is that the part after Jeff pointed at the kid is quite disconnected from the scene while that is the climax of the opening scene. That scene lack a dramatic feeling to the scene.
So that were the feedback we received! Keep in touch to receive the update on our FINAL PRODUCT!!!
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