Here is the editing proposal of our opening scene:
And below is the summary of members' feedback on the first draft:
The color is not so grade for the scene inside room
Transition look very cheap and unprofessional (should replace it with fade in/out)
The voiceover placement should be adjust (note that the voiceover in the video is not the final one and it is just the draft of where it would take place)
Need to add the titling sequence and a sequence introducing into the movie
Should change the footage of Jeff grabbing the shelf because it was blurry
Remove the shaky zoom in the end
Some important problems we found out is that first of all, the second edition of the script is not really work and we are missing an establishing shot. Because of that, we need to come up with the third edition of the script to arrange the narrative in the scene opening more wisely.
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