A succeed or another failure...
After read the second version of the script that I write, the group's feedback was quite positive. They all agree that this script is better and more doable compare to the first version of the script. They also said that they feel a sense of creepiness and horror after reading the script (exactly what I want). Even the teacher was a bit scare when heard our idea. However, there are still some problems with it.
After a meeting with all the members, we found that there are parts that need to be adjusted. First of all is the characters' name, it should be changed into English names instead of Vietnamese name. Secondly, there are some discontinuity within the script itself and there are some part that needs to be adjust. We also add some small details to enhance the script: we add the shoes details to enhance the distractor, we reduce the amount of horror in the start of the movie to trick the audience that they are not watching a semi-horror movie. Thirdly, previously the name "The Graveyard" was a talk to stranger website name but now we will change it into the name of the Pho stall that will be revealed by showing the menu at the end of the movie.
In addition, there were some problems with finding actors, meaning that we will not have enough actors. This make us to remove the character dad from the movie and let the mom will be the one who find the daughter at the end of the movie. There are also so minor change that in my opinion really increase the engagement of the script. Wait for the third edition of the script, it will not let you down!!!
P/s: Read the third version of the script HERE
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