[Post - production] 09/04/2024 - Fix the film accordingly to the feedback I got

After let members as well as other learners watch the first draft, I had received many valuables feedback and advice, tonight I am finalizing the movie base on those feedbacks that I have.

Here is a few notes on the reaction of viewers:

With those ideas in mind, I started working on the project again and solve each problem one by one:

• I watch the whole video again to find parts that room tone and foley sound are missing

• I shorten some scene that I think is too long

• I redo the timing of the animation (make the elements appear and disappear smoother and at the right timing)

For the ending, I also found that there are problems exist. So I have thought of a new way to edit this part: Parallel editing

• I put the 2 stories take place parallel to show the contrast better and to make it more dramatic

• I insert some more sound effects to enhance the scene atmosphere

• I change the order of the scene so that the secrets is reveal in the very last scene of the movie, leaving viewers with a silent to process what was going on with the twist.

And after completed all of that, I export the FINAL version of the video, can't wait to publish it!!! 4 months of work finally come to an end...